Still

[Drizzew]

Time served to drain my once sure heart
Of the pulsing desire I knew from our start
Vivid memories slowly faded to flashes
The ferocious fire now burned down to ashes
What was it I felt in those passion-filled moments?
Hours and minutes my mind's strong opponents
But from the dying fire I still pull a flame
It burns bright before me when I whisper your name
(this is the first poem I've ever written so bear with me. And I'm cracked out right now

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[This message has been edited by Drizzew (edited 05 August 2000).]

 

[cherub]

you did a good job for your first poem, even if cracked out !!
Big hugs

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Just takes one angel to change a life
~~~~CHERUB~~~~
Aka: Mommyhen

 

[Noodle]

Aaaaahhhhh... Crack an egg on your head and let the words run down and out like a tap just set to spilling. This work is good for my eyes and easy on the digestion. Double prop.

 

[skuby dew]

Good poem andrew. Very good job!
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ThanksGiving!!!!
The only time when a sistah cant get mad at a brotha for touching white meat!- Chris Rock