Rebirth

[Mysticalis]

Here I am, in ashen sorrow
Here I sit, without tomorrow
Putrefaction, chain reaction
I can't get no satisfaction
Here I sit and contemplate
The imperfections of my state
Here I am a broken man
Here I rest in broken hands
Fight or flight, the blinding light
Victim of a blackened blight
Here I rest and here I lie
Here is where I wish to die
Here I wake a soul renewed
Here I stand with strength imbued
Fires burning, planets turning
Begins a day anew of learning
Here I rest, a soul so mild
Here I am, a newborn child
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"I can't see! I can't see! Oh wait.... I just had my eyes closed the whole time."
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[BlazinTos]

That was great, every word lfowed off the last....Sounds to me as if you were explaining a k-hole...but sorry if im wrong...that's great anyways.

 

[Mysticalis]

Don't worry, your interpretation isn't wrong. One thing I've learned is that there is no incorrect interpretation.
It's pure coincidence if my poem accurately depicts entering and exiting a k-hole, since I've never done K in my life. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.

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"I can't see! I can't see! Oh wait.... I just had my eyes closed the whole time."
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