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poezante

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i swore to her,
nothing would ever happen
i begged to her,
everything was alright,
even though she pleaded things were coming down..
she prophesied the end was near
and i just refused her
she says its too hard to leave me in this world alone..
but why should i reject all my earthly loyalties for her
..and accept her emotional madness..?
she picks me up, and drops me in absolute pity
..some days she can be so cruel and apathetic..
i can not decide whether or not to give up on her all together
i tell her.. i love her..
i tell her, that she is unlike anyone or anything in this life
but she claims with all her heart she hates me.
can i do nothing to make her suffice..
what will it take for her to love me back..
one day may i silence her..
can one day,... i tame her within myself..
[This message has been edited by poezante (edited 17 May 2001).]
 
hey all,
tell me what u think of this.. be nice.. its mine
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to me its about a mother that is maybe in her peak of crack addiction and is refusing/denying her child. i like it, good job. by the way im also a fan of poe.
 
I really like that poem. It says alot of confusion. Not sure if your female or male,, but if your female it could be a conflict within yourself. Never happy with the way things are,, if your male hmmmmm that one i am not sure,, but i don't think it about another person per say def,, and image idealogy. But whatever it is i like it.
 
I think that was an awesome poem, I liked it a lot. It has a lot of feeling and emotion in it and I think that is what makes it so good.
PS by the way, this is jen.
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"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you."
-Winnie the Pooh
 
"...i tame her within myself" This line moves me. I can't explain why... it just does.
 
im really glad ya like you like that line.. i guess its just a freeze frame of how i felt @ the time
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CARPE DIEM
 
Wow. I really liked that a lot. The simplicity of the words used delivered the complexity of emotions felt extremely well.
To me, it really sounds like someone who has an intense love-hate relationship with her own self. Someone who sees potential within herself for something great, and yet not only doubts ever getting there, but is actually afraid of getting there.
Also, as someone who suffers from MAJOR mood swings, I can even relate to it at face value and it helped me realize what I often make my bf go through.
Thanks for sharing that sweets.
Luvs,
-Amina
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"Like a bird on a wire, Like a drunk in a midnight choir, I have tried in my way to be free" - Leonard Cohen
 
omg amina!
u got what i was trying to say DEAD on! geeez!
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.. o, also btw its about me.. im a moody phuk.. lol and i probably put my b/f thru crap.. but i send lovies, andy!
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CARPE DIEM
[This message has been edited by poezante (edited 06 June 2000).]
 
"can one day,... i tame her within myself.."
Woah, I just stumbled into that phrase, and it hit me smack between the eyes! I was reading that at face value and thinking...that's me, that's not me, that's me...wait a sec...wtf...this isn't even about me...I've been had! &*%$*^%#*) It took me back to a time when I was wee lad and the little girls next door used to play head games with me, the little boy, who was really gullible.
This poem is awesome! As the person who is on the OTHER side of the mood swings, I can so appreciate the inner conflict this poem so fantastically describes. Some days I wake up and sit outside thinking, gawd I can't do this any more. It takes every last bit of strength I have to not lose my mind when my gf is ripping herself apart at me, and it's only by consciously realizing what's going on that I can find the patience not to react. I am going to print this poem out and keep it with me. Thank you.
Love and hugs,
Bill
 
xtremeink - you know my jaw dropped when u said u would print this poem out and keep it.. that means a lot.. it not only means u like it, but that it means its touched ur soul in some way..
::pauses:: thanks you guys, ur all so wonderful!
p.s. writnpage - email me sometime cuz my phone isnt really working now..
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Poezante,
Sweets, are you an Edgar Allan Poe fan? If you are...YOU GOT GOOD TASTE. He's the ONLY American classical poet I LOVE!!! (Rest are Canadian/European)
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Look for my email in the next couple of days. And WRITE ME if you need ANYTHING but keep writing even if you dont
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Luvs,
-Amina
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"Like a bird on a wire, Like a drunk in a midnight choir, I have tried in my way to be free" - Leonard Cohen
 
I just re-read this poem again. Everyday, it has MORE meaning. Can't say that about too many other writings out there. WOW. This is truely unique. THANK YOU for creating that Poezante.
Luvs,
-Amina
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"Like a bird on a wire, Like a drunk in a midnight choir, I have tried in my way to be free" - Leonard Cohen
 
writnpage - YES, btw im a huge 'poe' fan.. i have an old book my grandfather gave me when he used to be in the service fighting for good ol' USA against korea..
anyhoo.. my name is from him.. which u probably figured out.. cuz ur such a smartie 'to zante' a sonnet he wrote.. u should read it.. its kinda obscured in that compared to his other work out there.. that sonnet is almost UNLIKE poe.. in that its a HAPPY one.. hehee..
p.s. i would email u BUT u have no email posted..
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CARPE DIEM
 
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