please read and respond (be honest!)

[Harmoni]

a naked dreamer angel-child
blows bubbles to the angry poetry on the subway walls
her violet aura enlightens the drunken desperate karma
of slashing whiskey slumbers
the clumsy shuttle of stuttering feet
and rushed whistle of hastey arrivals
slow suffocation dancing to this akward harmony
she teaches them to wve to the Jesus sitting on top of the subway walls

 

[PixieLoca]

Harmoni

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I like your lines...Especially the last two.
Teaching them to wave to Jesus sitting on the subway walls?(was that it/ I forgot already,) But it was very cool.
Sorry for slightly flailing in my attempt at replying....
-)ixieLoca

 

[dragonflyawy]

THAT WAS DEEP DEEP... IT DEFFENTLY PUTS A PICTURE IN YOUR HEAD.
mY SISTER nAME IS HarmONY. mINE IS mELODY
kEEP WRITING READ MINE
love YOU LOVE ME