my vision -entitled- "The Girl I Love"

[Pyro]

Blurred and tainted
color becomes blur
becomes smear
becomes patternd-chaos
becomes form
... only five feet away
as I walk
It's almost pointless to keep open
So I close my eyes
Maybe I was given this blindness for a reason
But all it does in interfere
As I walk I am stumbling
As I run I am falling
As I stand I am dizzy
Since there is only smeared color and vauge outline
Since all that is blue is green is red is black
Since it is all blurred mess, almost pointless
I open my eyes again
I grab her face with both hands and say
"I love you hold still, I want to see you for once
Please let me know you, not with my hands but with my eyes.
Far too often my life is too alone, even with you by my side I am secluded and pushed inward.
Because I can't see
Because I can't even picture you in my head
Because you don't even exist.
The girl I love"
Pyro
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[Angelight]

amazing

much love
angela
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"Try my exctasy... "

 

[poezante]

o.. my... pyro.. geez.. um.. whoooa thats beautiful.. thats all i can squeeze outta my head right now cuz im lost fer words @ this moment.. beautiful!
p.s. another thing im gonna print this out cuz i like it that.. much!.. beautiful!
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~*CARPE DIEM*~
[This message has been edited by poezante (edited 14 June 2000).]

 

[flux]

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[CytocHromE]

I think flux said it all. Wow.
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*Give a man a fish, he eats for a day. Teach a man to fish, he eats for a lifetime.*

 

[galaXy-gurlE]

outstanding.....I know how you feel.

 

[ForAnAngel]

oh my god that was so amazing. thank you so much for sharing.
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Life is too short to be a bitch -ForAnAngel

 

[mona]

 

[poezante]

u know i think this is my fave so far pyro..
i just wanted to give it an extra bump fer all the BL's ta read

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~*CARPE DIEM*~

 

[writnpage]

Thanks for bumping it Poe. I had missed it before. Pyro's paints emotions with words.
Luv you guys,
-Amina

 

[ApsychoticMind]

Simply put Pyro, you got skillz.
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PLUR
One...

 

[xtremeink]

Beautiful. You have a gift.

 

[rollinbunny]

beautiful bump
P.L.U.R
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rolling is like breathing in the universe

 

[rollingonx]

Pretty intense

 

[cherub]

once again, that is awesome, pyro!
maybe this is not a night I should be reading it or maybe it is. I am enjoying your works either way.
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Just takes one angel to change a life
~~~~CHERUB~~~~
Aka: Mommyhen

 

[Liquidgroove]

that was a beautiful poem =] hmm one more thing...is it just me or does everyone else hear music 9playing with this thread!
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REEEEEEEEEEWIND!

 

[Shootin`Salad]

That's deep...

 

[Crystalized]

I have to bump this.

 

[Pyro]

damn, you dug up an old one

Thanks though.
Pyro

 

[NymphOnE]

Dude! I read the poem 3 times just so I can hear the music. Or is that just me? That was asprin I took right? Can someone please tell me what that song was? I'd love it get it.