looking back

[Housekid7]

when we look back
at what we've done
will we remember
all the fun?
will we think
that we were right
will we think
we won the fight?
and if this happens
what can be shown
for the people
that we had known
did we do this
the way we dreamed?
will we regret
our days unseen?
and when i think,
then again
this life of a party,
might not end.
"whatever it is i think i see, becomes a tootsie roll to me"

 

[KiDdIe]

Really great poem.... i like it hehehe
kiddie

 

[Rollo]

The world is what you make of it. Keep your eyes open cause it aint over yet.
PLUR

 

[UFO]

Nice poem. It makes you think....

 

[dextroisomer]

Looking back now in 2021 Sept 2,
I can't speak for everyone but myself.
I lived the life of a great party.
I never thought the party would ever end.
In fact, never did it cross my mind.
I took those nights and days for granted.
Next thing I know here I am getting old.
My heart is full of nostalgia and my mind, are only thoughts that only mock me for not having a time machine.
On my saddest days, I can only relive those great memories of pure ecstasy.

 

[FixXxer]

Nicely written poem BTW...

yours as well.

 

[dextroisomer]

yours as well.

thank you!

 

[dextroisomer]

yours as well.

Mine really wasnt intended to be a poem. it was like a reflection but thank you very much. So kind!

 

[dextroisomer]

when we look back
at what we've done
will we remember
all the fun?
will we think
that we were right
will we think
we won the fight?
and if this happens
what can be shown
for the people
that we had known
did we do this
the way we dreamed?
will we regret
our days unseen?
and when i think,
then again
this life of a party,
might not end.
"whatever it is i think i see, becomes a tootsie roll to me"

You were right. Here I am looking back remembering with no regrets.