life's ballad..................revised

[poezante]

lying in bed,
with this pain in my side
i cant dream,
and i cant be..
just this hurt paralyzes me
i miss you....
unlike any other hell i've been dealt before
just everything is in disarray
and everything i touch turns to ashes
so i digress,
and fall deeper within my hole..
just happiness has not dawned in ages
..and i wonder if it will ever come to..
[This message has been edited by poezante (edited 08 August 2000).]

 

[PixieGirl]

hmmm...revised? What was it origianlly? This piece intriges me. Good as always!!

 

[poezante]

lol @ pixiegirl..
ya it was revised from an earlier post i did like a month ago.. called 'life's ballad'.. i changed it around a bit to fit how i feel @ this moment..
dont worry thou.. im okay.. just going thru shit i NEED to .. coping, becca's way..

 

[writnpage]

That's kewl about poetry....the masterpiece doesn't often arise until a decade after it's first concept.
This is an exceptionaly sad poem Poe

But beautiful none the less.

 

[Angelight]

my cali gurl-
i love it

much like i love everything else u cook up on this forum. Thanks.
much love
ur New Yorka