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Pyro

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I saw you awhile ago and didn't know what to think
I didn't know how to approach you
I ended up walking away, avoiding you completely
On accident though, I wound up crossing paths
with you
My pessimistic views lead me to believe
that you were only special because
You were here, now
And of course because they are mine, I agree with them
But that doesn't mean there isn't truth in my feelings, it doesn't make them less real
It isn't like I feel this way about everyone I come across
But then again it's not like my feelings are intense or strong
It's not like I'm putting forth massive effort to achieve you.
Because I don't feel strongly about you, does that make me wrong...
Wrong to feel about you? Perhaps like I'm not respecting you right?
Maybe you feel the same way too?
Maybe through your eyes I'm viewed the same, as just another one
Pyro
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GO NOW. READ. EDUKATE.
 
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And I don't want you to think I'm special
I don't want to be your savior
I don't want to be someone you look to for answers
Simply because I *would* let you down, and I couldn't stand to hurt you like that
 
I don't have time to email right now, but I just wanted you to know that I DID rush over to read your poem, and it's really...
Fuck, I hate the adjective part of compliments in this forum sometimes.
Um.. Heh, I could just go...
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Is that cheating?
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~*~ Ashke ~*~
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GO NOW. FEEL. BE HAPPY.
[This message has been edited by Ashke (edited 20 July 2000).]
 
Pyro...want to know the honest fuckin truth? I feel jealous when I read your poems. SO, even when they are so beautiful, and even though you are my adopted son and beautiful and glorious, sometimes it hurts to read them...cuz deep down inside I wish, someone like you, would write something like that, for someone like me.
...then the coffee beans starts brewing and I come back down to reality...The beauty of your poems is that it takes me to a beautiful land. A land of hopes and dreams and smiles and pleasant things. Your writings end me up in a garden of peace and hope. It's as real as the monitor screen before me, and reminds me of the first time I understood an abstract painting. I said.."Ooooooooooh!!!!!!!" for a good 10 minutes...and still say "Ooooooh!!!!" everytime I think about it...which your writings make me do .
Luv u much,
-Amina
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"Like a bird on a wire, Like a drunk in a midnight choir, I have tried in my way to be free" - Leonard Cohen
[This message has been edited by writnpage (edited 21 July 2000).]
 
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