It’s been a minute! Somebody read my shit 😌

[Howsway]

DAMN

Was it me or was it the
way my pain hit the surface

Deep secrets buried alive to be reopened

Wounds stitch tighter as footsteps vacates the space to breathe inside

Unplanned inklings
clinging to feelings I hide

Why does the sun set on my darkest woes
Why does time pass
as it leaves more holes

If I had an idea of where this would go
I’d stay locked away chained to my soul

Take me as I am don’t watch me as I go

Still scraping through for life’s gold
How you ignite me and starve me for more

Seamless conversation never had before

Excuse the excitement,
sun don’t hit me straight at the core

Damn, shoulda said less
and waited for more

Excuse the excitement, sun never hit me straight at the core

 

[Jabberwocky]

I was going to say, i love "Excuse the excitement etc" but you reiterated it at the end. Beautiful.

Welcome back!

 

[Howsway]

I was going to say, i love "Excuse the excitement etc" but you reiterated it at the end. Beautiful.

Welcome back!

haha thank you, glad to be back

 

[LadyAlkaline]

I read your shit

 

[Cheshire_Kat]

Nice, not only did you express what you discovered hidden inside; but you varied your meter and rhyme so that the story telling fringes between prose and poetry.

I like it!

 

[Howsway]

I read your shit

this ones a keeper haha thanks!

 

[Howsway]

Nice, not only did you express what you discovered hidden inside; but you varied your meter and rhyme so that the story telling fringes between prose and poetry.

I like it!

Aww thank you glad you liked it!