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In eyes

Angelight

Angelight

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In eyes i saw the world today.
I saw you across the table staring at me so hard.
In eyes i saw how sullen you looked,
I wanted to kiss away the pain.
The pain you are suffering inside, the pain you are bringing to me.
In eyes i saw the shallowest look,
I saw how angry you felt.
In eyes i saw the fear in you, the fear that melts away when we are together.
In eyes i captured the purest thought,
the thoughts of knowing you need to repair.
In eyes i wanted to build a castle, a castle that you could be comfortable in.
In eyes i noticed the fire in you, the glowing magic you possessed.
In eyes i let my feelings show through, something i thought i forgot about.
In eyes you smiled through all of your pain,
i thought i could help you heal.
In eyes saw something i can't explain.
I thought we could see through the same eyes one day.
 
all i can say is....fabulous
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i hope this person knows how ownderful they are, or must be, and how lucky they are to have someone like you love them so....
i feel utter warmth thinking that i share a friendship with you ange....
xoxoxox-
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satori shalom
 
I see you changing and growing and constantly become more expressive in each poem you write.
Satori made a wonderful comment so true.
You are such a wonderful writer, and person and such a wonderful friend.
Gifts come in such wonderful ways, I receive one of the best ones as having you as my kid and my bestfriend
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Love
~Mom~
 
Damn, that was deep. I liked it very much.
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"Well I guess I'd say, if it is just us, seems like an awful waste of space."
It's a big risk, but love is worth any risk. - From Crow
-=R a n d y=-
 
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