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It's about legalization of "drugz" for recreational purposes, and it's going to be detailed as hell. Here's the essay structure I was thinking of:
II.The Current State of The Unites States
A.The Good(Rights and Freedoms)
B.The Bad(Crime and Corruption)
C.The Ugly(Drugs)
III.The State of the States Before 1914
A.The Good
B.The Bad
C.The Ugly
IV.Proving that the U.S. Would Be Better Off if Drugs Were Legalized
A.Crime would go down
1.Correlate the nondrug crime rate over 40 years to cracking down on drugs
2.Point out that there would be less actual crimes to commit
B.Health would go up(akwardly put, but it's just an outline)
1.Less misinformation about drug use
2.More unbiased information about drug use
C.Hope would go up(I think I can pull this one off, it would help my argument if I did)
D.Money would happen
1.More employment opportunities
2.Government could tax it
V.Combatting the Projected Negatives
A.Nation of Addicts
1.Not everyone is addicted to alcohol
2.Have addiction treatment centers set in place
3.Use the Dutchs' example
B.Drug use would go up
1.Use Dutch example
2.Explain that isn't the goal anymore
C.It's morally wrong
1.Freedom of Church and state clause
2.For some people, it's morally right
VI.Closing
VII. Sources
In case you're wondering why I'm posting this outline for all of you to read, it's mainly for two reasons. One, I'd like your personal opinion. Tell me what you think I'm missing, tell me what you think I DON'T need, and tell me if you think my information is in the wrong order. Two, GO AHEAD AND WRITE YOUR OWN LETTER! If you've ever wanted to write one but never had it thought out, look at this as a starting block. Hell, I don't care if you copy and paste it word for word and e-mail it. Just get the message out. Three, I'd like your honest opinion. Tear this to shreds, rip it apart, make me spit at the mere sight of your handle. I just want this to be the best it can be.
Fuck if I know this'll work, I'm just an 18 year old who couldn't get through 2 years of high school. All I know is that I hope it works. And I have a feeling that hope is all we really have.
And to the mod that moves this, please read it as a mod, then respond as a poster.
II.The Current State of The Unites States
A.The Good(Rights and Freedoms)
B.The Bad(Crime and Corruption)
C.The Ugly(Drugs)
III.The State of the States Before 1914
A.The Good
B.The Bad
C.The Ugly
IV.Proving that the U.S. Would Be Better Off if Drugs Were Legalized
A.Crime would go down
1.Correlate the nondrug crime rate over 40 years to cracking down on drugs
2.Point out that there would be less actual crimes to commit
B.Health would go up(akwardly put, but it's just an outline)
1.Less misinformation about drug use
2.More unbiased information about drug use
C.Hope would go up(I think I can pull this one off, it would help my argument if I did)
D.Money would happen
1.More employment opportunities
2.Government could tax it
V.Combatting the Projected Negatives
A.Nation of Addicts
1.Not everyone is addicted to alcohol
2.Have addiction treatment centers set in place
3.Use the Dutchs' example
B.Drug use would go up
1.Use Dutch example
2.Explain that isn't the goal anymore
C.It's morally wrong
1.Freedom of Church and state clause
2.For some people, it's morally right
VI.Closing
VII. Sources
In case you're wondering why I'm posting this outline for all of you to read, it's mainly for two reasons. One, I'd like your personal opinion. Tell me what you think I'm missing, tell me what you think I DON'T need, and tell me if you think my information is in the wrong order. Two, GO AHEAD AND WRITE YOUR OWN LETTER! If you've ever wanted to write one but never had it thought out, look at this as a starting block. Hell, I don't care if you copy and paste it word for word and e-mail it. Just get the message out. Three, I'd like your honest opinion. Tear this to shreds, rip it apart, make me spit at the mere sight of your handle. I just want this to be the best it can be.
Fuck if I know this'll work, I'm just an 18 year old who couldn't get through 2 years of high school. All I know is that I hope it works. And I have a feeling that hope is all we really have.
And to the mod that moves this, please read it as a mod, then respond as a poster.
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