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HOPELESS or ANGER or HOW I FEEL WHEN USED

GoingStRaNgE

GoingStRaNgE

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this is some heavy angry shit i wrote a long time ago. i don't put it here for so much the elequence of the speech or the wonderful rhyme sceme >more like lack of< i just see it as some heavy emotion that basicly freeflows out of everyone >me in this instance< and if we can catch it in the act, it has a whole artistic honesty within itself.
or
simply, a positive outlet for shittyness
with that said
HOPELESS or ANGER or HOW I FEEL WHEN USED
07/98
How many fucking
Hoops must i jump
Through before the
Carrot is achieved?
Is it just me?
Or does my carrot
Float farther away
Im not a fucking dog
No, i wont roll over
But... you might spy me
Begging for a treat
Who are you to withold
From me
Rights a common shit can
Achieve
i watch the tear
& i know you delight in
The prolonged pain of those
With no fight
I HURT because I KNOW i started the PAIN
but,
You FUCK
YOU fuck with
The heads of the
Defenseless
Your sugercoat covers all crass
You shove your dick
Wherever you can find a whole to fuck
YOU FUCK
& care not what whores you make
& care not what dreams you take
You FUCK
You use a feather to
Tickle my dick
before you cut it
Off
The whole time watching me pretend to love it
Drooling with delight
As the blood drips down my thiegh
Your mindless peons
Rub salt in my wounds
& tell you if i
try to bandage my crotch
So you can
Pick the scab
How grateful i should be
Mabye ill get my carrot tomarrow
straaange
[ 17 September 2002: Message edited by: GoingStRaNgE ]
[ 17 September 2002: Message edited by: GoingStRaNgE ]
 
This is powerful. You were going through such hard times when you wrote this.
I know so many kids couldn't have survived what you went into for 2 years.
I love you sweetheart,
~ReD
 
emotion is a hard thing to deal with sometimes, and yet harder still to express. I think these words have worked their therapies on you... and i'm sure it worked out in the end, because eventually it always does...
 
You know I love your writing, and YOU KNOW I LOVE YOU TOO, but 'these smiling eyes are just a mirror for the Sun' (The Red Hot Chili Peppers, _Californication).
FURTHERMORE, it is 21 (3 x 7) years of bad luck to purposely break &/or deface a mirror.
"Speedballer, Rhodes scholar, bottom bitch and a bottom dollar."--The RHCP's again (same album).
And yes, a lot of stuff DOES revolve around ME; however I am still UNDER GOD and I still love GOD because He's pretty much the only only who loves me.
But, to answer your bold headline, if you are feeling used, THEN QUIT ALLOWING OTHERS TO USE YOU AT YOUR OWN EXPENSE. That is, of course, up to YOU.
[ 22 September 2002: Message edited by: Curious_George ]
 
^^Glad to see you have such "positive" feedback.
Good words that maybe Goingstrange should've heard awhile ago when he wrote this.
But i would say he is one of the finest guys i know that doesn't take any shit anymore from ANYONE, but me. :)
~ReD
 
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