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[mealltach]

I haven't posted anything in here yet, but I write a whole lot.
I would love a little feedback...
I dance freely in the rain
I love everything
(except myself)
(sometimes)
I choose to be afraid
(sometimes)
I remember.
I kiss the flowers
I feel so much pain
I live for the moment
I dwell in the past
I could watch the ants
scurrying on the ground
(forever) because
I see beauty in everything
I loathe some parts of me
I close my eyes a lot to use my other senses
I breathe (to live)
(live to breathe)
I like the taste of confusion
I am alive.
I forgive you. I am sorry.
(I aimed for something simple here as my first post...)
Thanks for reading!

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je danse pendant la nuit, quand tout le monde dort...

 

[Jesster]

i like it!!!...i've felt very similar to what i think you've felt from the way i've interpreted your poem

 

[cherub]

Beautifully written. I can tell you are going to be a bright addition to this forum I can not wait to see more of you work.
This poem is particularly accurate in feelings of alot of us feel, confusion and such and very weel put into words.

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Just takes one angel to change a life
~~~~CHERUB~~~~
Aka: Mommyhen
Dreams are like angels,they keep bad at bay Love is the light scaring darkness away Make love your Goal-Frankie Goes to Hollywood
~I still belive in your eyes~-Gigi D'Agostino

 

[mealltach]

Thanks so much for your comments, Jesster and cherub! Very much appreciated. ~~~muahz~~~

 

[Mysticalis]

Me likes! Me likes! Me likes! Very beautiful and inspirational poem.