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Do you remember?

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RaveAngel

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Hugs. Kisses. Phonecalls and late night visits. Smiles. Winks. Circles and squares. Clubs. House parties. Naps and passing out. Days upon days of being awake. Falling asleep during five minute car rides. Cuddling here and snuggling there. Happiness. Laughter. Sweetness and purity. The good old days. Do you remember? How I used to smile at you. How you used to love me. How I was the baby. Ready for anything. Carefree and excited. Life was beautiful then. We were beautiful then. But it was all just a fairytale, created in my childlike naivety. I should have believed you. That day. When you told me. My heart would be broken. It is. Now. Thanks to you. I fucked up today. And let a tear fall. Slowly down my soft pink cheak. The same one your lips used to press against so gently. And I thought the whole world must have seen. Because it burned so awfully. As that tiny tear slid and fell to the ground. I couldn't imagine that a pain such as this could be invisible. I saw it. Dark and evil. Dooming the brightness of my world. Because I. Gave. Everything. To you. Do you remember?
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*Shine on you crazy diamond.....*
*Sunni came home with a vengeance*
 
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nice work!!
dave
 
The tear you didn't see coming. Realizing it's importance as it falls down your face. The tears that want to follow. The energy it must have took to fight them back and sway this re-occurance of feeling, still strong in the far reaches of your being.
I will write something for you, to exonnerate this piece as best I can (i'm tired of saying "good work, thanks").
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And into the darkness I fell backwards again - or into the light. Back to the emotion of that second of realization. Back to those moments in time when I gave everything to you. And I want to never be there (here) again, why can't you stay where you are, and be without me. Why must I relive you so randomly? Why must you make me cry again? You will always have a part of me wether you acknowledge it or not. You live inside of me, forever it seems (if only for this moment in time). And I remember so much. Those tired days. Those endless nights. Sunrise that closed our eyes to sleep. And You.
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But I'll say thanks anyways. thanks for writing.
Tim - Pyro
 
Thanks kidds, for replying to my post... I'm glad yall liked it, or got something out of it, or whatever
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It's a sad sad world... but it makes me happy that I can share these lil writings of mine with someone. This one is about a battle I go through just about every day... *sigh* Hopefully one day someone will come along and sweep me outta that rut and let me forget all about it.... if that's possible......
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*Shine on you crazy diamond.....*
*Sunni came home with a vengeance*
 
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