Corrosion

[FuckinAcidMan]

frantic channel flipping fanatic
anticipation dripping
carefully curated stye slipping
day tripping without intent
have money but feel spent
bent out of shape
slave to the day
solvents for the brain and
solvents for the pain
do damage to the source
ripping the rot out at the roots
is harder than routinely
clipping back the wickedness that blooms,
considering it a part of you,
inadvertently tending to it
while the parastic patterns happily bleed you dry


the ritual is lost,
the signal's dropping off
out and about
while cold wind erodes
the corrosion within

 

[Juniper Bruhmomentius]

You always seem to hit the sweet spot with your poems

 

[FuckinAcidMan]

You always seem to hit the sweet spot with your poems

Thank you dude that means a lot actually

What's funny is I always thought writing was dumb and wished I could draw or paint better

 

[relex_author]

You always seem to hit the sweet spot with your poems

I agree, the poem is extremely good. I enjoyed it even though it made me feel slightly paranoid. But looking at this guys avatar

are we really expected to enjoy it?

 

[nznity]

Thank you dude that means a lot actually

What's funny is I always thought writing was dumb and wished I could draw or paint better

Loooool, same. Fuck drawing when u can write deep shit

 

[FuckinAcidMan]

I agree, the poem is extremely good. I enjoyed it even though it made me feel slightly paranoid. But looking at this guys avatar

are we really expected to enjoy it?

that's a great review tbh lol thanks man

 

[relex_author]

Oh nice a sarcastic lich

 

[FuckinAcidMan]

Casual-Friday-Evil. I have no idea what that means. But I can feel it.

Graveyard barbecues and watercooler chats with eldrich abominations. Goblins that drive taxis to pay rent. Smoking weed with a yeti. I love that kinda shit.

Idk this is like beyond off topic. But it's my own damn thread I guess.

 

[relex_author]

Jews who accept wanton or unspecified amounts of cash for no reason.

 

[FuckinAcidMan]

Jews who accept wanton or unspecified amounts of cash for no reason.

 

[Juniper Bruhmomentius]

At first I thought you were anothers users specified alt, but thats just me. I like your writings.

 

[FuckinAcidMan]

At first I thought you were anothers users specified alt, but thats just me. I like your writings.

Thanks man. To my knowledge this is my only account, lol.

 

[Juniper Bruhmomentius]

Yeah I figured it out later. On my view your still the best rhymer of words.