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Circles

Angelight

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We talk in circles...
maybe one day you could understand how i want my life to be.
We argue in circles
Maybe one day you could understand this is how i choose to rest.
We whisper in circles
Maybe one day you'll understand who i have become, why i choose to make the desicions that i do...
We dance in circles...
dance around all the important stuff that lingers in my mind, lingers in yours, and get no satisfaction in doing so.
We carry on in circles...
this repetivness of miscommunication.
We breath in cricles...
secrets that keep me up all night, secrets i wish i could tell you, secrets you no longer understand.
We dream in circles...
no longer dreaming of the same life you wanted for me.
Can't we stop these circles...the circles we both have formed.
 
Sweeartheart Angelight...
You know what makes your love/pain poems stand out from the rest? Even in pain, you don't WHINE. You HOPE. I know there is a school of literature that thrives on anguish and heart aches, and once mastered, that art can actually be quiet charming...and yet it grows so annoying and boring with negativity after a while.
And then there's poems by souls who have experienced love and pain, and yet, after all is said and done, there is a message for change and perseverance and acknowledgement of reality. You allow people to understand you, and hear there own selves through your eyes. It's really beautiful.
I believe in love Angelight. Sometimes relationships can get boring. SOmetimes they lose their charm. SOmetimes they just plain and simply go and stay bad for a long long long time.....but...IF there is LOVE...it will reborn again, the way you both want it too. Have FAITH in LOVE. Believe in it.
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Loads of loves,
-Amina
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"Like a bird on a wire, Like a drunk in a midnight choir, I have tried in my way to be free" - Leonard Cohen
 
Angelight,
you know how much I am fond of you personally but your work in poems is amazing.
You do such wonderful work my little one !
love you
~Mom~
 
Amina- thank you so very much. You know how much it means to me. Although i wrote this poem about a different kind of love, I wrote this about one of my best friends in the world...alot of what you say still applies to this...Thank you for your input...so very very much.
cin- i love ya, you know this already...thanks
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much love
ange
 
I always thought of them more as spirals then circles. Relatively the same concept, except with spirals we go in circles but we don't end up exactly in the same place as we started, continously going in new yet faintly familiar directions. The question is do we ever get to an end? Or do we even want to?
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If anything I do drugs to appreciate reality.
 
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