Can I have this with you?

[Genavieve515]

I want to dance with you in the rain
I want to see the drops run down your perfect face
Later we can fall asleep in each other’s arms
Let’s make love until the sun peeks from the clouds
I want to feel you inside me
Let’s make love
Let’s be together all night, all morning, all our lives
I want to read a little poetry, but only with you
If you’ll be mine.
I find you so very perfect, but can we be together? If not, why?

 

[writnpage]

That's absolutely gorgeous! I could feel every word, and the finale, full of or curious hope! I love the attitude you captured. Thank you for sharing that.
Your writing style reminds me of my most favorite writer/philosopher/Zen Monk...Leonard Cohen. Look him up on the internet if you're ever bored.
Luv,
-Writnpage
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"Like a bird on a wire, Like a drunk in a midnight choir, I have tried in my way to be free" - Leonard Cohen

 

[CARESS]

You have captured the longing and anticipation of a relationship not yet formed. I like it.

Caress

 

[CyaLuvyaBye]

why ??
yeah been asking myself the damn same question
love ur words
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i thought it was you i needed nevertheless i have learnt thru the pain i needed me

 

[Big_Red]

You are such a sweet romantic guy. awl.... gorgeous!!!!
-angie-

 

[Liquidgroove]

Aww nicely written. Short sweet and simple, thanks for sharing!

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Come roll wit me to da land of XTC
*~*PoSiTiVe ViBeZ*~*

 

[Doc.Jones]

I wish someone would say something like that to me

Thank you for giving me hope

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Take me as I am, and expect nothing more