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    Tomorrow I'll make a movie
    It's for those with blues and doubt
    It's about a lonely man
    Who's ready to check out


    I'll give everything I have
    But it probably ain't enough
    I found myself at the bottom
    Of the damnedest of luck


    I never watched a picture film
    Hell, I barely read the news
    I lay on my back
    Watching the sun turn to moon

    So, the script is rather devastating
    And I don't mean to give a freight
    I might be broken and alone but damn
    Did I try..
    __________
    You'll see me flying
    You'll see me flying
    And you don't know what it's like
    To be the loneliest of wolves
    So I'm flying
    No more crying
    And you don't know what it's like
    To be lost...
    __________


    And that movie will be for
    All the outlaws n bandits
    But it's also for you
    Still trapped on this planet


    Because I loved everything I had
    Kicked the can to the curb
    From my heart I'm Truly sorry
    For all that it's worth


    So, I'm tired of this game
    And I'm tired of living rough
    When you look to the sky
    You'll see me as a shooting star of dust
    __________
    You know I like to fly
    They all know I am high
    And you don't know what it's like
    To feel like a king
    So I'm flying
    No more crying
    And you don't know what it's like
    To finally be found
    __________


    You see I got?
    Black holes in my heart
    And god let me borrow his light
    And after this smoke
    I will bleed myself dry


    I shed his light upon my spoon
    drew up a tragic screen play
    I got it all in one shot
    And I drifted away

    So I rang the sweat from my jeans
    Shook the aches from my bones
    When his light hit my back
    I was on my way home


    I was waitin' for the right time
    The time to let you know
    But if you're hearing this now
    Im at the good doors of dope
    __________
    You know I'm flying
    Flying.
    And my ears are ringing
    to the tune of light
    And you don't know what it?s like
    __
    So I'm flying
    No more crying
    And you don't know what it's like
    To be Me
    __________

    Now my lights are fading out for good
    As a new lights in store
    I dropped out all alone
    Within the cosmos, reborn


    Headed to the land of love
    Endless company
    It beats the hell outa this earth
    When earth beat the hell out of me


    __________
    And as my lips turn from red to blue
    I try to say the words "I love you"
    And now I'm convulsing locked n bound
    I caught a fleeting tone of your delicate sound
    And I can't seem to breathe anymore
    Synapses and shocks make me slam to the floor
    Fading into my next chapter as
    I flatline from memories amongst our passed laughters
    And in my arms when you?d fall asleep
    I whisper in your ear wishing you all the worlds peace
    And I'll never forget the day we met
    As the light grows bigger, I see a silhouette
    Now I am falling asleep
    And there's no more me


    I am stepping into this dream
    I'm going to die
    Picking and choosing
    And you now know why
    There isn't anything; no more, cutie
    Because I am the one who wrote that movie
    __________


    You see I got
    Black holes in my heart
    And god let me borrow his light
    And after this smoke
    I will bleed myself dry


    I shed god's light upon the spoon
    Drew up a gram of dope
    I held it in my arm
    Like when I used to hold you close


    __________
    No more crying
    And you don't know what it's like
    To finally be found
    __________
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    That's lovely
    Did you write it?
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    Yeah. Lol. It's a "rough draft" of some lyrics to a jam i made.
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    I think its pretty cool actually
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    Too much repetitions
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    Stop adding and, add it just when you need it but I guess this is like a poem not an actual track or something
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    Quote Originally Posted by shadybraindamage View Post
    Too much repetitions
    Why don't you post some of your writings then?
    Let us see your genius at work?
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    No worries man. I appreciate the feedback. def could use some fine tuning but i'm just fackin around ya kno? Thx shadow
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    ^^
    Well IMO its really quite good.
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    Quote Originally Posted by BehindtheShadow View Post
    ^^
    Well IMO its really quite good.
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    It takes a lot of guts to post your private writings in a forum so well done to you Sam XXXX
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