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    Love drugs, not people ye kids note that down 
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    It's weird how all problems have the same element, different energies approaching asylums lands, break to invite
    Walkin on empty coridors dancing along the shadows

    Grey sky, black paths, found this gift into the woods
    Dragged her bones and meat with chains but only for love
    She was my doll more or less, no tears no marks
    Left it behind that day, got home looked for my syringes to pass on
    Thought back then to kill it while it sleeps or perfome a ritual
    Wind blows from dungeons,forgotten souls appear
    Night begin to be tortured by my head, voices are louder than usual
    She scratched my arm when I wanted to kiss her nipples, cheeks and lips for a bed time voodoo

    Glass in my feets, rain hitting the ground , I can't feel nothing
    Devoid of human life shredded memories, eyes don't lie whispers are yours
    Clock breaks tongue ripped off no remorse show's close

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    Last edited by shadybraindamage; 12-05-2018 at 04:11. Reason: playin with some usual words cuz fuck ya got inspired on moment lol
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    My hopes are blighted, my heart is broken, my life a burden, everything around me is sad and mournful; earth has become distasteful to me, and human voices distract me. It is mercy to let me die, for if I live I shall lose my reason and become mad.
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    lacking some prepositions I think
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    No, read the edit bar
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    My hopes are blighted, my heart is broken, my life a burden, everything around me is sad and mournful; earth has become distasteful to me, and human voices distract me. It is mercy to let me die, for if I live I shall lose my reason and become mad.
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    that's ok

    that's why I said "I think"

    can be high/distracted myself

    I liked the flow of your piece
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