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There Was a Forest

Captain.Heroin

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There was a forest
where the greed of man
was only a shadow of a heavy past

There was a forest
where the bark of the trees
reflected the beauty of a lost world

There was a forest
where the song of the night
awakened the sun of another life

There was a forest
where the sanctuary of heaven
watered the parched lands of the gods
 
So many times I wanted to end
To this impenetrable darkness that is life
To this lake of crying and blood that is my bruised existence

So many times I have seen the shadow of this rope,
On the wall of my remorse overwhelmed and gray
Inviting me to his dance macabre
The one that would free me from the stormy sea of my madness

My wounds bleed again
Bringing me back to the limbo of the past
Fucking violently on my heart
Throwing venom in the depths of his dungeons

I can not resist
To see your graceful deformed face
You, monster with a thousand cruel forms
He whom men name and fear, eternal misfortune

Kill me, kill me, I beg you
Tears my nauseating and moldy flesh
Torture my head, impose your pain
Until death makes my crying dry

Carry my vulnerability to agony
Chained to my martyr hatred and contempt
Consume my essence, lead it to the pangs of worry
Drag my heart to the gallows and drape me with solitude

Let me see the cold marble of my tomb
Abandon myself to this flood infected by deep bitterness
Take me forever into the limbo of saving extinction
In the Gehennas and the parades claims

Scar, put down your veil on my disgusted soul
Bring him not horror but beauty
Offer him such beauty that death will strike who will dare to contemplate it
 
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In the misty forests,
I wandered away from your stained kingdoms

Under the icy rains,
I wandered away from your cursed race

In the dark mountains,
The winds caressed my face

Under the gray and dreary sky,
My soul is resting from eternal sleep

In solitude, my body lies,
Dead

Away from your impure lands
Death in silence...
 
Also you can kind of tell because it is grammatically uneven at a few points, like people in English would use a few less words, even though it's a poem.
 
It'd look good to me regardless. Catchy even, so that make perfect sense. And yea, I may have glanced over your typos ;)
 
And I was just remarking that it's beautiful lol
 
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