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A few of my writings while using

lucifersam666

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Ladies and gentlemen, hello.

i just wanted to share a couple of my writings from last year while I was high on pharms. I have a genuine passion for writing so I typically enjoy feedback/constructive criticism. And If you have any poems or writings to share, I would be elated!
This one I titled "The ant with lead shoes"

"Time fills my shoes with old memories.
Yesterday I thought of you as tomorrow arrives.
These damned shoes tend to weigh me down.
Again and again.

Life is meaningless without passion
In the depths of our soul, it hides.
Be sure to choose your passion wisely
For the duck that loved to tread water.

The carousel of time winds of for the pitch
Like a rookie batter on his second strike.
Present turns to past with a runner on third
Once again, a full circle.
In my mind...

When the creative spout is capped.
It's the good things that stump me the most
Why do passed occurrences impact us
To the point of change.

Molting into a callused version of ourselves
With the "Big audition" on stage for the Big Wigs
Where gears become cool and a cog is the goal
Where us small ants get smushed

Well if that's the way it is then I want to be an ant
alas I can be messy as I please
And march to my creation;
the biggest experiment of all...
My life.

and at least then, in the moment
we can say we tried.
At least then we did it for each other.
You, Me, us and them

The views from my life
As the ant with lead shoes.
"



Next one is called "Fear the Younger Me"....
"Just take a look
The time that wasted
The choices made
And the chances took

And now I’m here
and it’s so clear
The song
The book
The end is near

To right the wrong
To set the stage
The answers told
But is it right?

My heart is loud
The bond we share
There is no vow
From then to now
So get it right
You’re here for good
The passed is now
The time you took

We claim it’s distant
It’s what divides
that’s all for keeps
This life we’re livin’

The sand slipped through his hands
The time
The wall
The man
— What’s it all for?"




Thanks and cheers,
LS
 
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There is a forum called 'words' for stuff like this. I'll move your thread over there. :)
 
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