Hey there, haven't posted in awhile because of personal issues but enough of that and onto the real point of the post. While writing this song I put myself into the mindset of a person about to commit suicide and this was his note he left. Anyway, I just finished this piece so let me know what you think, what you like/don't like... tell me if it sucked even! I can take it, I've been writing all my life so it's not as if someone hasn't liked a piece of my work before.
Take me back to the place where my dreams are made
And all my bad thoughts go away and fade
That place where if I do too much cocaine
I'll just wake up again and be okay
That place where last night becomes today
Pretending nothings wrong but nothing that I say
Will keep me from whats about to take place
And in this moment with you is where I want to stay
But I have to say goodbye now,
I never wanted you to find out
This life was too much for me, by myself
And if I could say one last thing
it'd be how much you meant to me
But I can't do that, I must say goodbye today
I hope you still think of me, now that I am gone
When the sun rises and the night becomes the dawn
Don't cry for me, For now I'll always be with you
I never meant to hurt you or ever do you wrong
And with you I leave the strength to stay strong
And if you ever forget just sing to yourself this song
And I'll come right back to you each and everytime
But it saddens me now to have to say goodbye
I have to say goodbye now,
I never wanted you to find out
This life was too much for me, by myself
And if I could say one last thing
it'd be how much you meant to me
But I can't do that, I must say goodbye today
Take me back to the place where my dreams are made
And all my bad thoughts go away and fade
That place where if I do too much cocaine
I'll just wake up again and be okay
That place where last night becomes today
Pretending nothings wrong but nothing that I say
Will keep me from whats about to take place
And in this moment with you is where I want to stay
But I have to say goodbye now,
I never wanted you to find out
This life was too much for me, by myself
And if I could say one last thing
it'd be how much you meant to me
But I can't do that, I must say goodbye today
I hope you still think of me, now that I am gone
When the sun rises and the night becomes the dawn
Don't cry for me, For now I'll always be with you
I never meant to hurt you or ever do you wrong
And with you I leave the strength to stay strong
And if you ever forget just sing to yourself this song
And I'll come right back to you each and everytime
But it saddens me now to have to say goodbye
I have to say goodbye now,
I never wanted you to find out
This life was too much for me, by myself
And if I could say one last thing
it'd be how much you meant to me
But I can't do that, I must say goodbye today