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BL guys- tell me what getting a boner is like? (research!)

amazingly well written in my opinion Deja.. really gives life to the moment and captures the energy of the experience of sex with somebody you love completely.
 
Thank you soooo much! You don't know what that means to me. My book, these characters, I truly love them. I've been writing this book for about 3 months now, and every bit of my heart and soul is poured into it on a daily basis. I'm glad their love comes across. Hopefully it will get published and you guys can all read it! Oh yeah there is a cool scene where all the characters trip like mad on mushrooms as well, of course a bluelighter can't write a book without a drug scene. ;)
 
That's really awesome deja! Very vivid imagery... so vivid in fact that I got to reexperience the subject of this thread again lol : > .
You're a talented writer :) .
 
Thanks you guys. I love you! I love you!
It really fuels me forward when people give me good reviews.

:)

*dances*
 
I agree with the above but that's what its really like when you are with somebody. You can't help but repeat each other and say things like "you feel so fucking good" "oh god" etc etc.. in my opinion this nails it with the realism thanks in part to the fact that it captures that aspect of the moment.
 
o0psy Daisy said:
as a text porn enthusiast, i wanna let you know that this is lovely. One tiny suggestion -- the line that didn't work for me is when Devin repeats what Cora says (“You feel so good Cora”). That part of the dialog is just a little unnatural to my ears.

Great job!!! :D
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I was hesitant about that part too. Like I said, it's a first draft. I'm sure in time I'll know the right thing for him to say right there. *makes a note for that line* I still want him to say something along the lines of "you feel so good" but I'll find a way for him to say it that is something other than just repeating the exact same thing back.

Thanks! Specific suggestions really help me a lot.
 
I liked it very much, but think that Cora should be less prude and let Devin get some anal action in.
 
^LOL!

This is probably going to be my most tame books. My next book is going to be nothing but a 300 page description of a coke and anal party.

:)
 
Bump. Archive pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease? This was one of my favorite threads and it really helped me a lot. :)
 
Not Deja . . . does Ur clit ever spontaniously get hard?
Do U ever remember that happening when U were really young?
What causes Ur clit to tingle?
 
Having an erection is like having your penis filled with the blood of god!

You also feel quite clumsy with it just pointing about at something, like if you walking past a waist high table everything will get knock off lol
 
Those little spongey toys they make for kids of dinosaurs or whatever. You put water on little pill-sized figures and they expand and grow until they're fully puffed up and water swelled. They grow surprisingly large considering the size they started in. It's like one of those with warm water.

Mentally, it's almost like a little hit of some type of drug, depending on set and setting, you're mind reacts accordingly. It could feel relaxing and empowering or it could give you that slight insecurity you get when you have a huge pimple on your face.
Benefit said:
The actual sensation of an erection is like an angel riding a cloud into Heaven and breathing glory on your balls as it passes through.
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HAHA!
 
Well, then there's the awkward point when your boxers come off when you have a massive erection, and it pulls it down, and then it flips back up and hits your stomach. Always expected the girl to just bust out laughing, but they never have. I must say I'm somewhat disappointed.
 
hey notDeja, I would love to read the sex scene - I missed it :(

you could PM me it though if you felt like sharing :)

hope your travels were wonderful

<3Andy
 
Gaian Planes said:
didn't read the entire thread but a word that always comes to mind (lol when I'm thinking conceptually which is not all the time when getting turned on!) about erections is: engorging.

It feels wonderful to have a LOT of blood pumped into my dick. Stretching, engorging, filling up, becoming hard. Ready to penetrate into a vagina and squirt my seed deep into her body. Yes, yes, woo it is hot in here! :)
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Weird to think this was my boyfriend posting about his boner I would one day take great pleasure in, except he wasn't my boyfriend then. I had no idea! lol Life is strange and cool. %)

Just bumping this because I am hoping it can get archived instead of pruned. This was a fun discussion I really enjoyed! And I really did use all this research for my writing, hehe. Thanks!

<3
 
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