My Last Good-bye

Crow

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My Last Good-bye
Seated at the kitchen table,
The old Mahogany chair squeaked with my every squiggle
As I looked up with eyes glittering like shiny new quarters,
Through my black helmet of hair,
To see her, dressed in her favorite blue floral shirt, the one with the giant collar,
Hanging off her worn body,
Gently tucked into her neatly pressed polyester slacks.
Seated on a stool and surrounded by suitcases.
My mother stands behind her,
Gently brushing her marble gray hair, into a ponytail, then a bun.
My aunt gazes at me, seated on her stool
Looking at me with eyes, behind a spider web of wrinkles.
The tweaking sparkle of her eyes glowed through her tinted coke bottle glasses.
She steps off the stool
Landing on brown leather sandals, slapping the tile floor.
She spreads her arms asking me to come and hold her.
I bounce off the chair, making the usual ruckus of noise
Casually walking to her, to meet her blanketing grip,
Feeling the once strong arms strain to hold me,
Calmly rocking me in silence.
I feel the comforting warmth of her body, seeping into me one last time.
As her muscles fatigue trying not to let me go.
As I slide out of her grip I remember
This old woman making her last trip.
And I, never to set my eyes on her again.
And her never to see me grow.
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"Deep in the human unconscious is a deep pervasive need for a logical universe that makes sense. But the real universe is always one step beyond logic."
Muad'Dib
Dune
 
Oh that was absolutely beautiful crow. So well written and touching. I am very impressed!
((((((HUGS))))
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Just takes one angel to change a life
~~~~CHERUB~~~~
Aka: Mommyhen
 
WOW!
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I am speechless Rich!
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Thank you.
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so touching, richard. good job.
kim
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If you are a dreamer, come in. If you are a dreamer, a wisher, a liar, a hope-er, a pray-er, a magic bean buyer...
If you're a pretender, come sit by my fire, for we have some flax-golden tales to spin...come in, come in...
 
Sweetie... that made me cry... Beautiful.
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*Shine on you crazy diamond.....*
*Sunni came home with a vengeance*
*Somwhere over the rainbow skies are blue, and dreams that you dare to dream really do come true.*
 
Just rememebr that with me as your friend, your BL twin, you will never truly be alone.
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"Well I guess I'd say, that if it is just us, seems like an awful waste of space."
-=R a n d y=-
 
I think there has to come a time when the only thing left for you to give someone is missing them... not a day goes by that I don't think of all the people I've lost in this life, and I know that you are as sentimental as I am Crowe...
This is beautifully written sweetie.
{{{{{CROWE}}}}}
 
Well..I don't think I've ever needed to tell you that you're a great person and a very wonderful writer. Great work...
 
well crow, life is cycles, things come, and things go. her memory will linger, and ultimately that memory will justify her existence. people like you will attract love, because you freely give love. now there is a vacuum in your life. my heart goes out to you, but remember, a vacuum like that will soon attract someone new, and the cycle will begin yet again.
 
loosing someone that means so much to you is an awful part of life....with words like these that express our feelings of loss, helps us to feel a little less alone...thank you for sharing, Crowe....much love to you..
 
amazing, as usual.
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The sky isn't always blue, the sun doesn't always shine... it's all right to fall apart... sometimes....
-------Robert Miles
 
I have had my heart broken exactly once.
I feel your pain.
A month after our break-up, she said:
"From the moment I met you, I knew that you were one in a million.
Now I just have to hope that you're two in a million."
{{{{{Crow}}}}}
 
I felt like I was sitting right beside you at that table....Lovely, hunny. MUAH!
((((CROW)))))
((((LOVELIFE))))
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i spent hours looking for this tonight. and i have found it. and i am bumping it.
i needed this.
 
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