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Wrote THIS while being manic

LittlePrawn

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Got released from the ward and a week after being at home, sleepless wrote this in matter of two minutes. Hope ya like it:

Laying on the hospital bed
In a white room
And for countless hours
Looking at black vent.

Baptized to the furthest
Layer of skin,
Still inevitably
Everyday walking with sin.

Feeling on the fingertips
The stinging cold,
While the frost still covers
The walls of heart.


Changing mind:
Writing, and dancing, and singing,
In the end of the fun,
Still giving birth to a guilt.

Majestic brute opening a page,
But repeating same lines –
Words circle around
In a loop.

The never-ending cycle
Of love and hate,
Headless serpent and

The taste of forbidden fruit…
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Sure, no probz. Just tell for what kind of music, style and what feel you wanna add:)

Black metal. :devilish:

I especially like these two parts...

Feeling on the fingertips
The stinging cold,
While the frost still covers
The walls of heart.

The never-ending cycle
Of love and hate,
Headless serpent and
The taste of forbidden fruit…
 
How about something like this? ?

Feeling on the fingertips
The stinging cold,
While the frost still covers
The walls of heart.


A cursed existence
Yet not without meaning
In solitude obscured from mortal reason
Emraced essence of dark forests
 
How about something like this? ?

Feeling on the fingertips
The stinging cold,
While the frost still covers
The walls of heart.


A cursed existence
Yet not without meaning
In solitude obscured from mortal reason
Emraced essence of dark forests
See, yours is way better!
Though I often use symbols or metaphors,
Cause my friends said I was being too direct and they're worried, haha
 
See, yours is way better!
Though I often use symbols or metaphors,
Cause my friends said I was being too direct and they're worried, haha

Nonsense, I think it's a good combination honestly. Your verse inspired me to write that.
 
If its brutal
then its metal
be a good lad
and step off the pedal
take this medal
you are worth it
I know
cause I trust my bones
 
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