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Writing Erotica

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MilzyWilzy

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I'm big into writing erotica and wondered if anyone else would like to share any stories?

Here is my latest piece:

The scene was noisy and overcrowded. Chatter, music and laughter filled the air.

Then, I saw him. That precious moment time in time stood still. I roused slightly and was intrigued as to who this unfamiliar figure was. His eyes held my gaze and I stirred. Who was this stranger that had stopped me in my tracks?

His name was Rik, a new member to the working team and as time went on, we got to know each other like two normal people. Except this was not normal. He made me feel, feel what I had never experienced before. What was this?

We grew closer and the alien feelings continued to intensify. Any moment we could spend together, we grabbed it with both hands. He was very special, unique and all the things that I never thought a man could be. He was of average height, he had long golden hair that he tied up in a ponytail, his smile was warm and welcoming, yet had a cheeky edge to it. His beautiful eyes were inviting and explored my essence. I felt feelings of want, lust, envy and for him to take me as his own. Creeping thoughts of love seeped into my head.

When we spoke, he would get close to my neck and ears, that sweet feeling of his rasping, warm breath caressing my skin. It was heaven, pure bliss. I wanted more of him. I wanted it all.

Then a sombre day came, it was time for me to say goodbye. He was leaving for new ventures, I was moving home. My heart sank, we would never be, I would never get to be close to this specimen of perfection again. Fate did not want us to be this time.

Many years passed by in a chaotic blur. I never ceased to think of Rik and where his journey had led him. The one that got away, I sighed.

A few more years passed and then a phenomenon hit. The wonder that is social media. Perhaps I can find him after all these years. I searched, searched for the man that once captivated me. Yes! I found him, I eagerly sent a message. To my dismay, I learned that he was married, with a family. No chance, I defeatedly told myself.

Many messages were exchanged and we finally rearranged a date to meet. After 12 years, I would once again be reunited with the one that set my heart and soul on fire. What would I wear, how would I have my hair. Will the spark still be in ignition?

It was, the night came, we were once more together, the heightened feelings of lust were very much still present. I was immersed in total adoration and I never wanted this to end.

A short time passed, we met regularly and enjoyed fun times together, but still, there was no physical intimacy, which my body and soul craved so greatly. I want to take this man for my own and me his. I want to feel the electricity spark as our skins softly touch. I want to be showered with his sweet, attentive kisses. I want our bodies to writhe in synch and experience a spectacular, mutual pleasure, great pleasure, mind blowing pleasure that will bring us both quivering to our knees.

One night, my wish was ready to come true. Now was the time, to allow us to delve deeper into exploring each other's souls, needs and desires.


The open fire is roaring and glowing with deep, red coals. We lay beside each other on a luxurious red rug. Passions evolving, urges growing. He stroked my sleek, soft, long and dark hair. I let out a much relieved sigh as he traced his hand down my cheek. He continued to brush my skin with his rugged hands. My body was engulfed in tingles. I lightly groan and urge him to carry on teasing my oh so sensitive body. He makes me weak, makes me feel intoxicated with pure, raw desire.

All of a sudden, a tall, large breasted woman walks in. I am taken aback by this. Who is this woman and why is she gatecrashing my special night with Rik?

The woman introduces herself as Anne, an old colleague of Rik's. He gently explained to me that he would very much like it if another female joined us and promises it would be fiery and steamy. I wasn't sure about this. I mulled it over and decided to open myself up to a new experience. It might be fun, I concluded.

We were all happily chatting away, when Anne stated that "I want my lips on his. I want to kiss him deeply with my warm, moist mouth. Please assist me Alexandra". We both took it in turns to kiss him. We pulled him deeper, each kiss lingering as long as the last. The mental and physical connection was incredibly strong and enticing. He wanted nakedness and he wanted it now. We were in no position to disagree and he ordered us in a stern, yet non threatening manner to remove his shirt. We obliged and got straight to work. His exposed flesh pleasing our eyes, I lick my lips and meet his gaze with mine. He demanded that we then remove his jeans. He slowly arose and we did as we were asked, I was in awe of him standing before me, I was in awe of the control that he was exhibiting and placing upon us. His pants were slipped off at his command and I was now in a highly sexed bubble of lust and carnal desire. Anne, getting highly aroused, kissed me with such force, such longing and such pining.

With his strong hands, he masterfully removed me of my clothes, stopping for a mouth watering kiss with each layer that he separated from my aching body. My chiffon blouse, my skirt, my bra and my knickers made their way on to the shabby red rug beneath us. His hands wandered lovingly with a hint of dominance over the silky smooth skin on my neck, lowering to my breasts. He took his time here, gently caressing my bare bosoms, mixed with a rampant grab every now and again. It was Anne's turn to be laid bare. He skilfully discarded her floating, knee length dress to the floor.

This was so exciting and wild. I didn't have time to catch my breath nor could I think straight. He had me captivated. He had us captivated. We were going to become one, three bodies indulging in making sweet, salacious love. He authoritatively asked that Anne and I tease him with a spot of fellatio. I clawed his inner thighs, I kissed his beautifully hairy stomach. Anne dug her long nails into his bum cheeks. He swayed around and around, under the touch of us. We were doing this, we were driving him crazy.

I ever so gently skimmed the tip of his pleasantly thick penis with my tongue. I teased, I licked, I sucked and I tickled. His groans of satisfaction was music to my ears. We revelled for hours in rapture. Anne and I each taking time to please him. Pure, euphoric and raunchy to the core. We were smothered in oil, wriggling, sliding, becoming one.

I suddenly felt a wave of intense and extreme pleasure. He entered me, gave me his girth. I wanted this, he wanted this. Together we were tangled, moving at a sedate and gentle pace. Anne begins to mount my face, she starts to whimper as my tongue moistens her vagina, grabbing my hair, frenzied and fierce. This is it, we are one, our souls as one, perfect, rhythmatic coitus, perfect cunnilingus.

Our bodies picked up pace and soon we were fucking, licking and oscillating like unrestrained beasts in the night. Grind after grind, thrust after thrust, taste after taste, screwing and pleasing with great energy and vigour.

Rik lay down on the red rug, his hard, lean frame sprawled out. I tried to tear my gaze away from the pale outline of his magnificent form, but it was no use and his devilishly handsome features shifted into a knowing grin as he caught me staring.

I straddled his delicious penis, facing away from him, I lowered my saturated vagina onto his yearning, solid erection whilst Anne was facing me, tickling and titillating my Breasts. I was adoring the feeling of him being being inside of me with such depth. I ride his length with force and intensity and Anne gains great delight out of this. She begins forcing his penis harder and faster in and out of my extremely damp cunt.

Rik abruptly grips my bum cheeks, my clitoris rubbing against his shaft and Anne's hand. We are fucking like greedy, hungry animals.

The pulsating feeling began to build up deep within me, my head began to spin, my body starts to shake uncontrollably. The release is coming and it is going to reach a phenomenal ending. The explosion forces me to fall and feel weightless. I collapse in ecstasy on his chest and lay there smouldering whilst Anne softly nuzzled my neck.

I gathered my energy. Anne and I undertook sucking, licking, kissing and embracing his shaft. I crave for him to erupt in exultation and submerge our mouths in juicy, lush semen.

Before we could have his luscious semen, it was Anne's turn to get fucked. Rik urged her onto her knees in front of the blazing fire. He teased the entrance to her vagina with the tip of his member. She wanted it, and she got it irresistibly rough. I was laid underneath Anne, nibbling and ravaging her large breasts. Her heart beating rapidly, she exhales into the explosion of her climax, spasming, complacent.

We aid Rik in providing us with his much wanted, delectable semen. We fuck him with our mouths to ejaculation. He gushes into our mouths, sharing his energy with us. He announces that he feels like he's passing the core of his soul to us.

We lay there, lifeless and satiated. Entwined Souls: Connection.
 
I'm in the process of writing something. I will post up when I'm done and thank you x
 
That's quite a generalisation.

Yes, other people other than 'bored housewives' do read Erotica.
 
I enjoyed it, and I'm definitely not a bored housewife!!!

I write but I've never tried writing erotica. I might give it a go and post here for criticism!!
 
That's cool, please do have a go at writing.

I don't claim to be a professional author or anything but I have a very good imagination and love writing it down.

I look forward to seeing your story if you ever get round to penning one.

Good luck hun x
 
That's cool, please do have a go at writing.

I don't claim to be a professional author or anything but I have a very good imagination and love writing it down.

I look forward to seeing your story if you ever get round to penning one.


Good luck hun x

I have penned several... I just never shared them with the world.... I worry that people will ridicule my stories but, in the same breath, a lot of them have been written at very poignant intervals in my life and I worry that people will see nothing but empty words until I'm ready to disclose the stories behind them.
 
That's cool, please do have a go at writing.

I don't claim to be a professional author or anything but I have a very good imagination and love writing it down.

I look forward to seeing your story if you ever get round to penning one.

Good luck hun x

I started writing.... It quickly went from erotica to crappy sex story!!! Definitely need to try again. I forgot how much fun writing was!!! I have just bought a new notebook so I can write on the go... Maybe I'll find inspiration on my travels!!
 
I'm in the process of writing something. I will post up when I'm done and thank you x

I feel you..I really like to get super high on Meth and put porn on the TV and write stories about my fantasies....
I've always been a writer, and I've always been really sexual....add the two up at add some lines of Meth and ooooh man lol
 
Other than to shock people, I don't see what value it has. Somebody known only as gay_porn_writer used to spam the comments section of conservative online news sites with erotica. Then there was the guy on here who posted erotica about bestiality who got banned.
 
@milzywilzy add me as a friend so I can message you. I like to write quite a lot of erotica I'll happily share with you, I also like to write it about me and other people so would be great to write some stories with you in.... If you don't mind if course!
 
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