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suzieq70s

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I hope I'm doing this in the right fashion. If not please feel free to tell me a more appropriate way to share. I've got like 40 poems but this is the last for tonight

I'm feeling low right now
I really don't know how
To bring myself up
Feel like giving up
My life is caving in
Don't know how to win
Back my happiness
Lord I'm such a mess
How did I get here
To where I am near
Going to sleep with fear
Of waking up unclear
Of what today holds
And of pain untold
Uncertainty unfolds
Just try to get through the day
What does it matter anyway
Down on my knees begin to pray
For my resolve begins to sway
Contemplate saying goodbye
This makes me begin to cry
I'm not ready to die
I won't give up on life
And I will always strive
To see the good side
In this I abide
 
please post the others and keep working on them

see you around friend :)
 
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