Poetry pity me

[Snafu in the Void]

I'm the dry spidery crab
desperately skittering
back and forth
parallel to water
unable to avert eyes
dancing with the heat
which burns me blue,
black with pain,
written in red,
screaming inaudibly
unable to reach the water

pity me,
pity me,
pity me

(just something I thought up in the shower... )

 

[FixXxer]

my friend.. i will not pity you.. i behold whatever it is that makes you... you... in awe of its beauty...
if i think you need help.. i will help...
sometimes we all need help...
others.. it is the battle that strengthens us...

(please keep writing.. anything at all.. even if it doesnt ryhme... or is imperfect in your own eyes.. the journey is to improve upon the past?.. )

 

[Snafu in the Void]

my friend.. i will not pity you.. i behold whatever it is that makes you you, in awe of its beauty...
if i think you need help.. i will help...
sometimes we all need help...
others.. it is the battle that strengthens us...

(please keep writing.. anything at all.. even if it doesnt ryhme... or is imperfect in your own eyes.. the journey is to improve upon the past?.. )

thanks friend

sometimes I just translate daydreams while taking a shower into poems I don't put much thought into it

 

[FixXxer]

sometimes I just translate daydreams while taking a shower into poems

i feel this deeply..

I don't put much thought into it

definition of raw ? i think that is what @tubgirl.jpg likes? lol

 

[tubgirl.jpg]

definition of raw ? i think that is what @tubgirl.jpg likes? lol

@Snafu of the Forest - I really liked this. Very relatable and nice rhythm.