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"La douleur exquise"

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"Oh, la douleur exquise"

When you told me to leave you alone
I felt something sinister derive
I put my thoughts into you
as if stored on a USB-drive
Then I'd watch them unravel
through desolate defeat,
the panic in your eyes
When you wanted my opinion
I used my silence as a knife
When you said "I can't take it"
I felt compelled to hold symposia
If you offered oneiric future
I'd elucidate a selcouth dystopia
I remember when you said we were
like a tenebrific constellation
A paroxysm made me put out stars
under pressure of peril predation
Darling, you became my new fix
But I made you the dependant
I bit my tongue til I bled when
you were incendiary by resplendence
And you were always the cure
'cause I was always the disease
"Oh chéri, m'a réjété,"
You screamed as I walked,
"la douleur exquise!"
 
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Wow. What an opening. I'm especially fond of "Then I'd watch them unravel through desolate defeat."

When you told me to leave you alone
I felt something sinister derive
I put my thoughts into you
as if stored on a USB-drive
Then I'd watch them unravel
through desolate defeat,
the panic in your eyes

Loving the alliteration here.

A paroxysm made me put out stars
under pressure of peril predation
 
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