Poetry hateful error

[Snafu in the Void]

I really hope some of you
can understand my viewpoint
no matter how
deranged, foolish,
or obnoxious,
I always have a point,
which I would say was
love

I only ask that you view
my fatal error,
my life's waste,
with kindliness,
espescially if you can relate

But these posts are the total of my doing
They will age badly
for they were made out of focus
I refuse to recant
Not their fault?
Whose fault?
Mine?

I am asked to hide my viewpoint from them
for fear of their fear
hate is no crime
but the shame of a deliberately hateful life
is

 

[Jabberwocky]

Damn! I really did not anticipate that you have that kind of, well, talent but... a trait. Within you. Yes, surely i like you. But now you fucking surprised my stinky butt. Much love to you. Appreciated to the greatest extent. Have a pleasant day.

 

[Snafu in the Void]

heh, thanks, this has a deeper meaning maybe others here will appreciate

I write a lot, but usually a bit more darker

 

[MydriHaze]

hate is no crime
but the shame of a deliberately hateful life
is

I'm not sure, stir up hate can be altruism, death surrounding us, it might help doing no harm from those who survive from the hated...

 

[FixXxer]

heh, thanks, this has a deeper meaning maybe others here will appreciate

I write a lot, but usually a bit more darker

the darkness holds the concealed truth.. bringing a light would help people that struggle to understand you see your true message clearer.

Dark : a wall is black, there sits a child crying

Light on : wall lights up, see a brick wall and the child's parent behind them consoling them

or maybe when it lights up, its actually a chain link fence behind, and another child is seen running away with a toy



Many 'light' people don't like to feel 'dark' , but they are inspired with how you deal with it when you shine a light on how to deal with it

Dark: i fell down, and it hurt

Light on: i fell down, and it hurt but i got back up, brushed myself off, and kept going, learning to watch my step


You cannot see light very well in a sea of lights, and you cant see at all in the pitch dark
Light and dark strengthen each other when used in contrast

I love you (no homo lol) and your work bro, travel through the dark at will my friend.. i think youd bring it to the next level if you brought your light there